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Tuesday, February 2, 2010

In Class Righting Response: 2nd Choice

Perspective of Susie

Day 6th in heaven
Dear Diary,

It's my first week in heaven, but it's not as perfect as I imagined it would be. I'm really bored and I wish that I was on back earth with my family. During this first week I decided to check down on earth. I was curious on how my friends and family were handling that I gone and anyone have discovered any evidence why I passed away. Apparently, no one had found my body yet and everyone still thought that I was still alive. This made me disappointed, I wanted everyone to know that I have already passed away. Also I desperately want someone to find my murderer, Mr. Harvey. I wish that I could give my family or the police a clue on who murdered me. Unfortunately, in heaven we can not have contact with the living. If someone found that Mr. Harvey was my murderer, I would finally be at peace in heaven.

Day 8th in heaven

It was another average day in heaven, I decided to check down on earth. I discovered that the police found some evidence, the evidence that they found was on of my elbows. I was glad that they found something. The police told my dad that they believe that I was not alive. My dad was in denial that I was gone and told them that it was not certain that I was dead. I felt sorry for my family and what they have to be going though.

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